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Tuesday, October 18, 2011

updates in haiku

Thirty-four degrees
The windpants, the gloves, the hat
Running in the dark.

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Fish still upside down
Feeding peas every day
Weird creatures they are.

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Each day it reminds
Of the popcorn left too long
New microwave, please. *



*wasn't my fault....


6 comments:

Judy said...

sixty-four degrees
and I thought that was awful
How do you do that???

agg79 said...

I'm with Judy. Sixty-four sounds downright balmy. And your goldfish are still gassy?

terri said...

I don't know why, but I find the asterisked "wasn't my fault" to be hysterical and it is cracking me up.

I would have expressed my sentiments in Haiku, but... well, I'm just lazy tonight.

Kim said...

Love haiku. A bowl of baking soda left in the closed microwave for a couple days worked for me.

Anita said...

I like your haiku. Good 17 syllable stories. I should try it. :)

kathryn mays said...

I love haiku! you've inspired me to post some of mine. Abby, I live in northern Mi and can totally relate to the cold temps. It's just the beginning of another six months!